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Huan Yi
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0 posted 12-20-2005 09:02 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Sleep well
My love

Here
No one can touch you

No ugly
Boggy man
Can come here to hurt you

And I will stand guard
Over your solitude
While you recover why

You choose still
To be alive
Despite the absence of God

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1 posted 12-22-2005 11:21 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

brrr, reads more cold and chilling than angry
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2 posted 12-28-2005 09:33 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This does chill... but it also warms... a caring guard can hasten recovery... even when physically miles away.
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 12-28-2005 10:20 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Can't put my finger on why I like this so much but I do..

There is something in it that reads me...but yet eludes me.

a readers perspective I suppose.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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4 posted 12-28-2005 07:01 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

i feel the bite here
Huan Yi
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5 posted 12-28-2005 07:10 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi


Thank you all for reading

The title refers to the sudden mood
in which this was written after reading something
which, for me, lends weight to the suspicion
that too many write and speak from the safe
side of the screen.

Thanks again for reading.

John
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6 posted 05-01-2007 03:17 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

good anger! and shut the curtain.

nice to read your anger though I have a taste of it before. or after? can't figure out.
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