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0 posted 2005-12-23 08:04 PM



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I laid the presents out with care beneath the Christmas tree
To make sure everyone had something there - including me!
But, as I checked the names off, there was something rather odd....
Oh, no! I realized there was not a gift for God!

I mean, there wouldn't be a Christmas if not for the birth
Of His son, Jesus, who was born to bring peace to this earth.
Seemed only fitting there should be at least some gift displayed
To recognize the blessing and the sacrifice He made.

But what does one give God? I couldn't think of anything
That Sears or Wal-Mart had in stock to be fit for a king
But I would gift wrap something, though symbolic it would be
With hopes that He would recognize my deep sincerity.

I had no time right then, however. I flew out the door
To get down to the church where we had meals for the poor.
Downtrodden souls whose lives did not turn out as they had planned,
And it felt quite rewarding when we filled a needy hand.

From there, right to the orphanage we flew with bags of toys
To cheers and shouts of glee from all the homeless girls and boys.
Young hands tore wrappers off their gifts in wild anticipation
As "Ooooh"'s and "Aaaahh"'s and shining eyes made quite a celebration.

Just one more stop to make - down to the rest home for the aged.
Our small choir sang so beautifully we could have been on stage
From room to room, our voices rang with carols and with hymns
For those who knew that very soon they would be there with Him.

The evening finally ended. I rushed home as fast I could.
The father being late for Christmas wouldn't be too good
My children whooped and hollered from the second I walked in.
I raised my hands and grandly said, "Let's let the fun begin!"

Oh, what a night we had!  Wrap paper scattered left and right
While boxes were torn open with loud squeals of delight.
Big hugs for Mom and Daddy - thanks to Santa, naturally
Then off to bed for youngsters and, at last, tranquility.

My wife prepared herself for bed. I walked out in the yard.
Some puzzling thought was in my mind that got me thinking hard.
Oh, no! It was the gift for God - the thing I hadn't got.
With all the rushing around, it was the one thing I forgot!

I raised my face up meekly as if in apology.
The brilliance of the stars shone down and almost blinded me.
I stood there silent for a bit then gently raised my hands
To ask for His forgiveness. I sure hope He understands.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (09-22-2007 06:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-12-23 08:15 PM


  
another present, and on my birthday yet at that Dear Deer...

this is so very, very touching and lovely,
thank you Michael.

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2 posted 2005-12-23 08:42 PM


...and I thank you, Gentle one. May your birthday be as special as you are
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3 posted 2005-12-23 09:34 PM




(giggles in delight) That's alright, everything is forgiven, my friend, for as is well-said, "Even the most humble gift, if given in love, will be acceptable in His eyes." (smiles) God Bless You, dearest friend, now that you have found Him the most perfect gift, just wanted to ask if you've got Jolly Ol' Saint Nick's cookies and milk prepared! (giggles) Uh oh, wait, everything's fine, I've got some Entermann's and Silk on hand you can take, yay, this is sooooooo wonderful, Merry Christmas Weekend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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4 posted 2005-12-23 09:45 PM


Balladeer, this sang to my heart like an angel in song.

You are a beautiful MAN and God really did make you in His Image! ~ Well, almost!

Your recitation was superb ~ and the poem a treasure.

Hugs with love and appreciation,
Linda

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5 posted 2005-12-23 10:39 PM


Awwww Balladeer, this is absolutely beautiful. I am sure God understands. I believe that your gift to God was, when you did all those kind things for all those other people.
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6 posted 2005-12-24 12:30 PM


I have a feeling He's enjoying your wondering mind and giving soul right now!  

Sure would like to keep this in my library... Thanks, Balladeer!

miscellanea  

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7 posted 2005-12-25 07:22 AM


Merry Christmas, Balladeer!
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8 posted 2005-12-25 08:39 PM


Ahhhhhhhhhhh they are all saying here   Merry Christmas to you Michael.
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9 posted 2005-12-25 08:56 PM


You make me smile - from deep inside - Merry Christmas to you my Deer Friend...
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10 posted 2005-12-25 10:05 PM


Noah...you got the message loud and clear! Best to you......

Earth Angel...if He's got my image, I feel for Him! Thank you for finding a treasure in it..

Smart Chick..doing for others is always what's important. I know that you give of yourself, too. Merry Christmas, my friend.

miscellanea..I will enjoy very much being in your library. Thank you!

Sunshine....a big backatcha!

Mysteria...I know where you are! My Christmas wishes to all of the wonderful ladies..

Nan...your smile is a beauty to behold. I wish you the very best for this Christmas season...

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11 posted 2005-12-25 11:56 PM


Merry Christmas...James
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12 posted 2005-12-26 12:41 PM


  Deer, I think you did give him a gift.
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13 posted 2005-12-29 11:40 AM




I get it....

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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