Will it always be that way

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Open Poetry #36

Will it always be that way

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-16 02:32 PM

Did I see you in summer
Were you dressed in a manner unknown
Did I fail to recognise
Or words
Or atone
Of a woman I knew in things I didn't
In hearts of colour difference smitten

Did I see you more than you were
As failure assured
In what I never knew
Was there

Did I see you in winter
You were dressed in frost
On edges of your clothing
Swirled
Flashing
Lost
Or my
Loss
or
Enlightment

Did I see you in Spring
Galloping as you may
Did I remember
Autumn

Will it always be that way

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-12-16 02:37 PM

Bodger....I enjoyed the season's changing in your poem.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-12-16 11:32 PM

NIce flow of words...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-12-16 11:44 PM

Nicely done, Dave. I think it's one of the best I've read of your posts, and I've read many.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2005-12-17 03:02 PM

Great write....one of my favorites.

Eric

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2005-12-17 04:23 PM

Thank you my friends

I am still earning money but hopefully I can take a brief respite

and write some words

Thanks

Dave

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