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bgj
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0 posted 2005-12-16 12:18 PM


          Home Fires

I think about the way you move
So graceful and divine,
Your hair long waves of amber curls
Deep scented of the vine.

As a ship that spreads it’s sails
Before the morning wind,
My heart unfurls and fills with love
That only you can send.
          
I think about your dreamy eyes
Warm fires that sooth my soul,
They fill my thoughts and midnight dreams
As you I long to hold.

Your body’s like a storm tossed raft
As you yield to me,
Rising and dipping in the waves
Of passions turbulent seas.

Like a river that never runs dry
Your love endlessly flows,
It fills my heart with joy and bliss
As I travel life’s uncertain road.

        Bobby G. Jarrard


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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2005-12-16 08:31 PM


what a lovely write!
thank you for sharing this!

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-12-17 08:13 PM


So softly said, a picture worth a thousand words.

Happy Holidays,
TD

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3 posted 2005-12-17 08:24 PM


A beautiful beautiful write.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

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4 posted 2005-12-17 09:03 PM


Nice write,  could feel the passion as well
as the picture you painted for us....
Me thinks sailing is in order..

bgj
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5 posted 2005-12-18 11:20 PM


Thanks guys for your comments. Merry Christmas and Peace to all.
bgj


  

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6 posted 2005-12-19 09:31 AM


Bobby~

I do like the undulating thoughts that ride the waves of tender emotion in this piece~

'As a ship that spreads it’s sails
Before the morning wind,
My heart unfurls and fills with love
That only you can send.'


I especially like this part~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-12-19 09:47 AM


such a very loverly & sweet message my dear poet...very much enjoyed.
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8 posted 2005-12-19 12:57 PM


Oh, I like your metaphors.  Well done.  And Merry Christmas!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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