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shades of paul
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0 posted 2005-12-16 09:14 AM



Moist branches in snow,
tell of holy sprit glow,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Pine needles of blue,
makes my heart pursue true,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Ice covered bell steeple,
calls to all of Gods people,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Stain glass window mist,
conceals spirit heart kiss,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Jesus legend fateful day,
and took all sin away,
Church Whispers in Winter.

Christ's music crescendo,
wants all sheep to know,
of Church Wispers in Winter.



shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (12-18-2005 12:16 AM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-12-16 03:30 PM


Well done but likely to be more read in the forum for religious poetry. I did enjoy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

shades of paul
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2 posted 2005-12-16 10:55 PM


Thanks for the tip , you have entered the new poet always learning zone....paul

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3 posted 2005-12-17 08:08 PM


A serene and peaceful feeling befalls the reader.  So pleased you graced us here, as many may not journey to seek this comfort.
Contrast is the beauty of within.
TD

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4 posted 2005-12-17 08:28 PM


A very uplifting write..
much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

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5 posted 2005-12-17 11:33 PM


Stain glass window mist,
conceals spirit heart kiss,
Church Whispers in Winter.
  
    
    
   wow need i say more
       pure of heart sir
~wolfie

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6 posted 2005-12-17 11:39 PM


Paul~
I greatly enjoyed seeing this here~

The repetitiveness worked well ...~
Enjoyed the read~

Somehow the word whisper always gets our attention~
(duh ... wasn't that a commercial thing a few years back ?)

Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-12-19 02:56 AM


Enjoyed...James
shades of paul
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8 posted 2006-01-15 05:55 PM


Thanks for all the comments...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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