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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-12-16 02:28 AM



Beneath snow
On wooden eaves
A woman— watching


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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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1 posted 2005-12-18 01:36 AM


A hauntingly beautiful image!

- Owl

bgj
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2 posted 2005-12-19 12:47 PM


I agree. Lots of luck,
bgj

Decaflame
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3 posted 2005-12-19 02:43 PM



Delicate
as only you do, John.

Thank you.


inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-12-19 04:51 PM


a pristine beauty in the chill here
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2005-12-19 06:05 PM



Thanks everyone

So much depends on how
something is said, apart from words used;
it's very hard to capture on paper

Glad you like it.

Thanks again

John

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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6 posted 2007-04-20 02:45 PM


third time to mention  wooden eaves. why? so impressive!  because the swallows?!

beautiful.

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