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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-12-16 02:25 AM



Again— a child—
Eating rye bread
With yellow butter



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-04-20 10:14 PM


a very peaceful scene. bring calmness to readers.

very nice. several words have such strong power to comfort.

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