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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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0 posted 2005-12-16 01:32 AM


Red Furniture

Lily's parents
sat me down in their
custom red furniture
ugly as a supermarket
dizzy as a swingset
and I sink into pleather
wating for her
under their microwave gaze
I need a witty turn of phrase
I need a smoke
and they offer me a Coke
and they offer me a future
tie me to mixed emotions unsure
with her

Just as Lily descends the stairs
red headed freckle-speckled
twin brothers in pairs
leer at me
I can't see
I'm too lost in her
but her parents glare
and icily stare
as I silently take her hand
and lead her out the door
such a sweaty hand
driving, arriving, fourth floor
hospital cold as December
shivering, I try on vain
to comfort her

On through 9 pm
I wait
for the time
to get the call
through the gate
and back to her

On through tomorrow
I'll sit down in
red hospital furniture
I'll wait for her
contrast white knuckles
on white bright walls

She emerges
Lily emerges from the white
crying in surges
tides of tired dread
well went the "operation"
the faceless doctor said
she falls into me
blown away like ashes
after this abortion
heavy, wet eyelashes
as we sink into the pleather
red furniture
I'm just a speck, a micron
away from her

"The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Liver and a Broken Heart'

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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
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1 posted 2005-12-16 01:55 AM


red furniture and a microwave gaze...

I enjoyed your description throughout,feeling melancholy toward the end.  

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