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whiskey
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0 posted 2005-12-15 04:17 PM



A Nightmare explained to me
Not understood
Rolling feeling of sadness
Overwhelming my soul
Laying half nakid on hells bench
Proding, pinching unable to feel
Now moved into shock
The loss too much for ones heart to endure
Arriving home with non stop tears flowing
Into the arms of a loved one
To await the day of your death
Tomorrow I will have to say goodbye
Morn comes the nightmare continues
Driven to the sterile place of your death to be
Sat waiting pain growing slowly within
Hours pass drugs increasing
Till one moment in time is here
I push and feel you escape my body
Tears flowing down my exhausted cheeks
As away they take your tiny body
Given no chance in this life to be
Im told you had your brothers nose
A vision I will hold with me forever
Im sorry you and I were never able
To share love, grow and cuddle to my chest
Now im left to live without you.

© Copyright 2005 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-12-15 04:52 PM


I am so sorry for your loss.
Nothing can compare to the loss of a child.
Heart hugs.

Martie
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2 posted 2005-12-15 04:54 PM


I understand this pain and there is nothing worse.  Heart hugs!  
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2005-12-15 05:24 PM


I'm so sorry for your loss. HUGS
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-12-15 05:33 PM


OhJulie~
I am so very, very sorry for your tremendous loss~
Angels are angels forever ... bless you hon~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2005-12-15 06:01 PM




thinking of you and wishing you comfort

M

majnu
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6 posted 2005-12-16 12:43 PM


god keep you.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-12-16 01:01 PM


I do understand this, And am so sorry for you loss.  Heart hugs to you.
OwlSA
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8 posted 2005-12-16 02:06 PM


My prayers for you and your little angel.

Hugs
- Owl

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