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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA

0 posted 2005-12-15 03:02 PM



So you say you feel
Like your misunderstood
Your down and your out
And this time you think it's for good

The cold days seem colder
The nights seem a little longer
No one to tell your troubles too

Well baby let me assure you right now
That I'm here for you

Now I know that you've had
Some hard times
Believe me I've had
My share of em too
If you'd just take my hand
We can dream once again
And this time our dreams will come true

Let me love you
And bring back you faith
Let me hold you
On the hardest of days
Now I know I'm not perfect
But I'll try hard to be
Let me love you
Like you want to be
Let me love you for lovin me

When it seems your life's spinning
Out of control in the rain
Nothing seems to be working
And all that you feel is pain

I can promise you my soul
My arms to hold you thats true
But the best thing I've got
Is what in my heart
And how much I truly love you

Let me love you
And bring back you faith
Let me hold you
On the hardest of days
Now I know i'm not perfect
But I'll try hard to be
Let me love you
Like you want to be
Let me love you for lovin me


Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-12-15 03:11 PM


ok...

Oh Yes!
me  thinks me like!!!!! I like it alot!!!

Very, very beautiful song....Tender and sweet!

I asked Santa for a love just like this..hmmm?

You have been reading Santas mail...naughty!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
2 posted 2005-12-15 03:13 PM


See Ask and you shall recieve!! THanks ARH!!
May you have a Wonderful Holiday Season!!

Rich

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-12-15 03:17 PM


Thanks Rich for making my request come true...and you have a Very Merry Christmas...may it be full of happiness!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

poetrypapi
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 8
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2005-12-15 08:54 PM


Good God, have I ever felt that.  I truly like your art.

Bobby Lee

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5 posted 2005-12-18 04:02 AM


very nice. i hope you recieve the love you desire

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-12-18 08:36 AM


Rich~

'When it seems your life's spinning
Out of control in the rain
Nothing seems to be working
And all that you feel is pain

I can promise you my soul
My arms to hold you thats true
But the best thing I've got
Is what in my heart
And how much I truly love you'


Now this seems to me to be the best Christmas present one could wear ...
all year long~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
CA, US
7 posted 2005-12-19 10:55 AM


that was an awesome poem ,i can really relate to this poem right now.


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