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Open Poetry #36

Traveling Standing Still

poetrypapi
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since 2005-12-15

Posts 8
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-12-15 01:58 PM

We all move around.
Hardly ever standing still.
Most go where they want.
Basically whenever they feel.

Some fail to realize.
There's another, different breed.
To one's control.
They must concede.

Their brain tells them.
Move from this spot to that.
Dealing with the repetitious spiral.
It is that they must combat.

The see the same exact visions.
Never changing day after day.
There's only knowledge.
To be picked up along the way.

Walking many miles.
Hundreds if you will.
Footsteps hit the same spots.
Ther're stuck traveling standing still.

Bobby Lee

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-12-15 03:34 PM

"Walking many miles.
Hundreds if you will.
Footsteps hit the same spots.
Ther're stuck traveling standing still"

Hello, poetrypapi! I've not read you before so let me welcome you to Passions! I know just what you mean in this poem. I enjoyed the read!

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