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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-12-15 01:27 PM



Impulse, a native curiosity, laments ingrained the falls of natural mines
Drawn down deep together, each as a fragment of the other
Salivating the murmuring effects on space designed within
Renovating, culminating in the rake of coals below

Did you know of the thousand seconds ticking mark on time?
Where you breeze the passageways of echo backs
Lips pause just beyond the brush of particles combine
Holding their emotions vibrating in the hope of reunion

Waiting…waiting to taste the wine of purpose
The give of hardwood bulkheads moan in release
Deep into the chasms of yearning seek valiance
And oh, the ache is soothed, formidably and finally

These signature expressions once held against my will
Now held within your arms spellbound and anxious
To give without regret, without demand
Untainted draws the nectar to the brim, sliding into rapture

Here begins again the wonder of spirit sounds
Elusive in the fluttering of souls, found home its very essence
So much to say, time drifts away, and now becomes discovery
Such as said in certain honesty, and whispered back caresses velvet throat

Copyright Kkh 12/14/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-12-15 01:37 PM


this was beautiful, especially this part

Here begins again the wonder of spirit sounds
Elusive in the fluttering of souls, found home its very essence
So much to say, time drifts away, and now becomes discovery
Such as said in certain honesty, and whispered back caresses velvet throat

this was absolute peace and calm

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-12-15 01:46 PM


Kathleen~

'So much to say, time drifts away, and now becomes discovery'

What a wonderful thought ... discovery~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-12-16 11:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2005-12-17 03:02 PM


Beautiful write!

Eric

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5 posted 2005-12-17 07:21 PM


A wonderful write Kathleen.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

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6 posted 2005-12-17 08:37 PM


Salivating?  Isn't that sorta like drooling?
Nahhh, not when a girl does....

Very nicely done TD...but hey,  that is not
something new!

tatalinia
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7 posted 2005-12-17 11:09 PM


awesome poem, wow.
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