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goth_chick19
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0 posted 2005-12-14 06:33 PM



" Tears to stop "

If my tears were to stop falling
No longer me here now
Cease let go and be
Purple at close of my eyes
Darkness black my light
Angel waiting in the mist
Time ticking days lost
All of me and my will die
When bird takes flight to sun
Gone sanity, now begun
A smile taken not
I hate, face with happiness
I cannot be without my one
Stuck in time without a gun
To bleed Id still not feel
If my tears were to stop
No longer me here now

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aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2005-12-14 09:20 PM


good expression gchick , it can seem like life is all darkness when you can't be with someone who you desire and want to be with , love can be a dangerous emotion at times
it is essential to be happy within yourself
without another to co depend on , when you find that place the love will be there, as it is always there  
- keep writing please
peace ~wolfie

goth_chick19
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2 posted 2005-12-14 10:01 PM


Thankyou for your reply, although the poem isnt about unrequited love its about the death of a child
Aenimal
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3 posted 2005-12-15 01:30 AM


raw, honest purge. welcome
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-12-15 07:33 AM


deeply expressed, and emotive.
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INclan
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5 posted 2005-12-15 07:42 AM


Interesting Goth_Baby...
I read and re-read you, 5-6 times.
I hope to see more from you.
Welcome to "Passions"

INclan

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