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Some people make snow angels

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Juju
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Some people make snow angels
Sometimes after the snow falls
People laugh, slipping in slush
Often singing "deck the halls"

Some people shovel the snow
Early in the evening
But I sit in my last class
As I look out the window
Watching the snow falling

And all I canít think about is
-The last day Iíll see you-
And it is snowing outside.
  

-Juju-

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The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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OwlSA
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1 posted 12-14-2005 04:50 PM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Exxxxxxxquisite!  A non-poet would simply say, "I love you and I'll miss you."  You, on the other hand, created a beautiful pathway leading past images of others, all the way up to the pinnacle of your own sensitivity.  A masterful example of understatement.

- Owl
Juju
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2 posted 12-14-2005 05:58 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Thank you,

I am glad you took the time to read my poetry.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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3 posted 12-14-2005 10:11 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

Some people shovel the snow
Early in the evening
But I sit in my last class
As I look out the window
Watching the snow falling

And all I canít think about is
-The last day Iíll see you-
And it is snowing outside.
    
  
  
    
    
      
JuJ~ woooow, you melted this snowman with this awesome overflow of the heart...whoever he is, he is a lucky guy ...
merry christmas and a happy new year too
~wolfie
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magical words of winter,very nice,well written...

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

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5 posted 12-14-2005 11:13 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade



~awesome~
hugs, Chris
iliana
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6 posted 12-14-2005 11:29 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Oh, this is sweet, Juju!   ....jo
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7 posted 12-15-2005 07:49 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Aw Juju, could feel you in this one.
  Happy holidays sweetie.
Juju
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8 posted 12-16-2005 01:20 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Thank you for taking the time to reply.


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

RMW
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9 posted 12-25-2005 11:49 AM       View Profile for RMW   Email RMW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RMW

Lovely.
El_Campeador
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10 posted 12-29-2005 12:13 PM       View Profile for El_Campeador   Email El_Campeador   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit El_Campeador's Home Page   View IP for El_Campeador

I like it! Thank you for sharing.

Ben
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11 posted 12-29-2005 12:21 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very very nicely said..you are a joy to read.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Huan Yi
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12 posted 12-30-2005 04:58 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi


Very Anna A.

good

John
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13 posted 12-30-2005 10:50 AM       View Profile for DejaEntendu   Email DejaEntendu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DejaEntendu

I like this a lot, especially the ending. Nice Job.
JL
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14 posted 12-30-2005 01:12 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

This is a beautiful write, but it seems it stopped too soon.
Heartfelt.

JL


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15 posted 12-31-2005 12:07 AM       View Profile for Jeep Monkey   Email Jeep Monkey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeep Monkey

Life going on -

Enjoying the snow.
Purposefully shoveling the snow.
Whilst you just can't get the "miss" out of your mind - the snow falling means something different in this case -

I enjoyed this very much!
Juju
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16 posted 01-09-2006 08:14 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Thank you for all of you replies.  I appreciate it alot.
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17 posted 12-08-2009 12:03 AM       View Profile for Desirer4New   Email Desirer4New   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Desirer4New

I love this ! sooo good
 
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