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Juju
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0 posted 2005-12-14 04:26 PM



Some people make snow angels
Sometimes after the snow falls
People laugh, slipping in slush
Often singing "deck the halls"

Some people shovel the snow
Early in the evening
But I sit in my last class
As I look out the window
Watching the snow falling

And all I can’t think about is
-The last day I’ll see you-
And it is snowing outside.
  

-Juju-

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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1 posted 2005-12-14 04:50 PM


Exxxxxxxquisite!  A non-poet would simply say, "I love you and I'll miss you."  You, on the other hand, created a beautiful pathway leading past images of others, all the way up to the pinnacle of your own sensitivity.  A masterful example of understatement.

- Owl

Juju
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2 posted 2005-12-14 05:58 PM


Thank you,

I am glad you took the time to read my poetry.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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3 posted 2005-12-14 10:11 PM


Some people shovel the snow
Early in the evening
But I sit in my last class
As I look out the window
Watching the snow falling

And all I can’t think about is
-The last day I’ll see you-
And it is snowing outside.
    
  
  
    
    
      
JuJ~ woooow, you melted this snowman with this awesome overflow of the heart...whoever he is, he is a lucky guy ...
merry christmas and a happy new year too
~wolfie

shades of paul
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4 posted 2005-12-14 10:52 PM


magical words of winter,very nice,well written...

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

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5 posted 2005-12-14 11:13 PM




~awesome~
hugs, Chris

iliana
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6 posted 2005-12-14 11:29 PM


Oh, this is sweet, Juju!   ....jo
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-12-15 07:49 AM


Aw Juju, could feel you in this one.
  Happy holidays sweetie.

Juju
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8 posted 2005-12-16 01:20 PM


Thank you for taking the time to reply.


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

RMW
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9 posted 2005-12-25 11:49 AM


Lovely.
El_Campeador
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10 posted 2005-12-29 12:13 PM


I like it! Thank you for sharing.

Ben

Enchantress
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11 posted 2005-12-29 12:21 PM


Very very nicely said..you are a joy to read.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Huan Yi
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12 posted 2005-12-30 04:58 AM



Very Anna A.

good

John

DejaEntendu
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13 posted 2005-12-30 10:50 AM


I like this a lot, especially the ending. Nice Job.
JL
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14 posted 2005-12-30 01:12 PM


This is a beautiful write, but it seems it stopped too soon.
Heartfelt.

JL



Jeep Monkey
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15 posted 2005-12-31 12:07 PM


Life going on -

Enjoying the snow.
Purposefully shoveling the snow.
Whilst you just can't get the "miss" out of your mind - the snow falling means something different in this case -

I enjoyed this very much!

Juju
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16 posted 2006-01-09 08:14 PM


Thank you for all of you replies.  I appreciate it alot.
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17 posted 2009-12-08 12:03 PM


I love this ! sooo good
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