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MGROVES
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0 posted 2005-12-13 08:09 AM



i want you to know
that i am here~
trying to understand
your pain = your fear~
i listen to what
you say~
but excuses
wont change what you need
they only delay~
so much anger that it has
blown out any light to reason~
there seems to be no way
of pleason~
youve closed your door~
yet expect love and more~
but how can it enter~
when a mind stays
locked in self center~
please dont take this wrong~
i do understand your pain
and your sad, sad, song~
i see in you
what i have left behind~
i am not saying your mean
nothing of the kind~
but for changes to take place~
takes more than a smile on ones face~
one needs to think and see
a different way~
its called reality
not a game or denial
but emotions with understanding
and accepting others mistakes
and words not word play~
you dont know how others feel
or what there thinking about~
assuming all the answeres
without asking or listening
you judge guilty without a doubt~
your pain and fear
keeps love out~
i do understand
i have been there
but now i am here
so lets take a different route~
we all have needs
we all have some pain~
we all have cried tears that pour like rain~
i pray for you each night and day~
for some peace and understanding and forgiveness
to come your way~
so please dont take this wrong~
for once i am trying to be a friend
and help you sing a better song~
addictions in life can take a toll~
creating lonliness, as you become
less of who you are, in your self defeating role~
i am sorry if my words might hurt~
but your a person, a friend, not just dirt~
i care~
so with you my heart and soul and time
i share~

remember i am here for you~
when your ready
i will do what it takes to help you make
it through~

another day~
a different way~
please forgive me for what i had to say~
but your important to me
and a friend i want you to stay~


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

© Copyright 2005 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-12-13 08:21 AM


it is wise to not compromise your identity simply to belong...this to me, is a caring friend, and when I'm wrong, or have said things to someone that have hurt, unaware of what I have done, I'd surely prefer my friends to tell me so, talk it over.  At least you then know, where your coming from, and hurt/anger doesn't build, so so many people don't want to correct they're problems, but want to continue complaining about they're mistakes...and this, to me, rings out true friendship, but much more, unconditional love...allowing this person to decide but letting them know, your there for them...

Incredible, adding, I hope this person realizes the treasures in your heart.  

Hugs for this lovely read

D.Lester Young
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2 posted 2005-12-13 08:24 AM


Very well thought out poem. I liked "but for changes to take place~
takes more than a smile on ones face~" among some other parts.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-12-13 08:33 AM


MGROVES
A friend tells you what you should hear
A lover just wants you to be near.
An excellent write.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-12-13 09:14 AM


Marcia~
This is a beautiful, caring piece~

'i do understand
i have been there
but now i am here
so lets take a different route~'


YOU are a friend to be cherished~
Love you, I do~
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-12-13 07:11 PM


thanks, i hope she understands.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-12-17 12:26 PM


thanks i hope he sees the light this time

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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