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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2005-12-13 07:47 AM


Sunshine terrain of open-minded thoughts,
Individualistic path of independent dreams,
Paint strokes upon a faith of levitation,
Meditative artmosphere of one’s identity.

Garden of creative individualistic faith,
Blossoming upon one’s wings of freedom,
Flight of the individual spirit upon its signs,
Passion prayers of simplistic mysticism.

Atonement of tranquility of a soul at peace,
Truth blossoming true from the grave of lies,
Poetic voice of wildflower ’n hummingbirds,
Heartbeats of one’s religion of compassion.

Hugs upon humanities face of divergence.
Cracks of mirrors evaporating in miracles,
Reflections of contented harmony rippling,
Music upon words of religious conscience.

Poetic prayer of the love of the language,
Blessing other within the heart of your being,
Hugging words full of love of life’s meaning.
Giving thanks in creating miracles upon others.

D.Lester  12 05/05 ©
Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time.
davelyoung1@hotmail.com  poem for the ride upon American thoughts


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-12-13 08:06 AM


Poetic prayer of the love of the language,
Blessing other within the heart of your being,
Hugging words full of love of life’s meaning.
Giving thanks in creating miracles upon others.
absolutey beautiful write all wrapped up in a PERFECT ending.  Well done!

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

MGROVES
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2 posted 2005-12-13 08:11 AM


thanks for sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2005-12-13 08:15 AM


May the "Gentle Spirit" be blessed this Christmas Season with the miracles of creation inside and outside who you are.
D.Lester Young
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4 posted 2005-12-13 08:18 AM


The Magic makes GROVES upon the path of our smiles, may the path be of peace and tranquility.
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5 posted 2005-12-13 07:16 PM


ah, very peaceful thoughts and words
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