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marcel
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0 posted 2005-12-13 12:40 PM



Love Eternal

No love loves a loving woman
Like the love of a passionate man
Whose kisses and warm embraces
Wash away her tears of pain and memories,
Creating golden rivers of silent whispers
Making promises of eternity to his thirsty heart…
And though the sun has yet to see tomorrow,
Light could not make more beautiful,
The love of a man, smiling into the eyes of forever…


Marcel

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iliana
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1 posted 2005-12-13 02:15 AM


Perfection, marcel!   .....jo
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2 posted 2005-12-13 05:05 AM


very beautifully put

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-12-13 08:57 PM


Marcel~
And this is passionately beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-12-13 10:31 PM


aha! So that is what you have been up to! lol

May such a love, last for an eternity!


Linda

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5 posted 2005-12-13 10:46 PM


Creating golden rivers of silent whispers

~*~

what's that acronym?

IWIHWT....

Gads....

I wish I had!


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-12-13 11:15 PM


Enjoyed...James
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