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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2005-12-11 09:16 AM


let not your heart break
rather break mine in its stead
that you be happy
~*~

Inspired by: /pip/Forum93/HTML/003934.html
a GREAT poetess and friend!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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1 posted 2005-12-11 09:18 AM


compassionate

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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2 posted 2005-12-11 09:21 AM


Beautiful!  May I add?

when you turned from me
my heart burst into small bits
a sound no one heard.

It's SO good to have you home!

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3 posted 2005-12-11 09:26 AM


MGROVES ~ Thanx for the read

Enchanted One ~
never turned away
I'd never break golden heart
else mine would wither

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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with you
4 posted 2005-12-11 10:51 AM


there could be no joy
in your loving heart breaking
come hold me instead


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5 posted 2005-12-11 11:01 AM



Susan
~*~

holding you is joy
giving my heart is easy
blinded by your love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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with you
6 posted 2005-12-11 11:13 AM


come then, and hold me
this heart overflows with love
and it's all for you


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7 posted 2005-12-11 11:13 AM



The gift of giving
stems well from your heart, Sir...



.

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8 posted 2005-12-11 11:23 AM


*sigh* your words travel swiftly to this heart filling me with the knowledge that your heart beats with compassion and love...I absolutely love this poem....**big hugs**
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9 posted 2005-12-11 11:24 AM


Susan
~~*~
I can easily
live on your heart's overflow
lovely sustenance

Sunshine
~*~
I give from my heart
you take from my living soul
while replentishing

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2005-12-11 11:26 AM


Good Lord, what a beautiful display.  Made me smile, almost brought me to tears, only because I know, been there, am there.

And a lovely tribute to one very strong woman.


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11 posted 2005-12-11 11:27 AM


Startime
~*~
hear my words to you
let your heart be filled with love
sharing happiness

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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12 posted 2005-12-11 11:30 AM


littlewing
~*~
what beautiful words
my heart smiles at your reading
and at our sharing

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2005-12-11 12:28 PM


good read
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14 posted 2005-12-11 06:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet friend, it's this sort of devotion that only makes love stronger and brighter than ever, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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15 posted 2005-12-11 07:42 PM


beautifully idealistic.
wonderful.

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