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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-12-11 06:25 AM


like a fixed kiss, you held me:
and my heart took refuge

what a heavy throbbing beat there

an ocean of dream, saying yes
then no, then       no

you are the summer
you are the sun
you are
daughter of the heavens

and i

am the drowned woman
rapt in your sea skin

a mass of birds flee from me

i tremble            as i rest
on the goblets of your breasts

i saw eternity in motion


how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-12-11 08:30 AM


i saw eternity in motion
--------------------------

BELLA!!  If anyone could see eternity in motion, it truly would be you.

How beautiful this is Maree,
both poem and your new picture.

You truly are magnifico gal.

oh...and congratulations on your 10,000th post!
Now....do it another ten thousand times
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Bella



seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-12-11 11:19 AM


OMG....
I love this...
Congratulations on your 10,000th post!!

(((I am keeping this)))

[This message has been edited by SEA (12-11-2005 12:02 PM).]

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-12-11 11:19 AM



So...here it is...

The 10,000th wonderment...

You keep us willing captives, my friend...

thank you for giving so freely of your
talented emotions...



Love, Mom

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littlewing
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4 posted 2005-12-11 11:19 AM


I don't know why Maree but this reminded me of being seaweed of sorts, trailing upon the spirit of the waves.

Your smile is contagious, beautiful picture!

and Congrats on your posting.


Startime55
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5 posted 2005-12-11 11:29 AM


A perfectly stunning way to celebrate such a milestone...I love it...**big hugs**
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2005-12-11 11:34 AM


... and I see poetry in motion

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-12-11 11:37 AM


OMG!!!  This is SO beautiful!!!
And, I love your new pic.
Hugging you and smiling back at you.

~Let peace begin with me...  

Martie
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8 posted 2005-12-11 11:40 AM


Maree

Lovely you!!  

Aenimal
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9 posted 2005-12-11 11:41 AM


am the drowned woman
rapt in your sea skin

glad you went with that line bella, a fantastic play on words. as always, a passionate write




vandana
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10 posted 2005-12-11 12:28 PM


nice read
Nightshade
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just out of reach
11 posted 2005-12-11 01:05 PM


Like opening gifts at Christmas....each post of yours is a thrill.
Congrats on 10,000 !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2005-12-11 01:09 PM


my goddess but you are gorgeous...


Aenimal
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13 posted 2005-12-11 09:22 PM


minchia! manco ho visto che 'post-asti' la nuova foto. mah sei veramente beddazza! mannaggia la miseria, se tu non era sposati, podemo fare il tipo di sesso illigelli nel a menno 50 stati
exhale
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14 posted 2005-12-11 09:53 PM


you are the summer
you are the sun
you are
daughter of the heavens

and i

am the drowned woman
rapt in your sea skin



beautiful.
wonderful write.

iliana
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15 posted 2005-12-11 10:09 PM


10,000 beauties!  Congrats, Maree!
Dark Angel
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16 posted 2005-12-12 04:35 AM


Bella, and YOU are Bellissima. Thank you.

Susan, I thank you so much.

KARI.."wonderment" not sure, but 10,000...hmm a long time coming heh. Thank you Sunshinygirl.

Susie, thank you so much for your lovely reply, the "beautiful" and your congratulations.

Startime55, I thank you kindly.

Interloper...*smile*..thank you.

Nancy, hugging you back. Thank you so much.

Martie? and lovely you

Bellloooo, thank you always for, well... you know, being you and always being there.

Vandan, glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Chris, your replies are a joy. Thank you

M'lady Serenity... and ty.

Bello, 50 stati? allora una volta in ogni stati sole? Mannaggia la gallina. Aiuttoooo!

Exhale, thank you sooo much.

iliana, you are so sweet. I thank you.


m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 2005-12-12 08:44 AM


Raph stole my favorite lines..

Loved this...and love that new picture!! You are gorgeous!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2005-12-12 09:48 AM


and then there are your eyes
that dance with that smile
hatless you are brazen

and I like your picture to ms D

LeeJ
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19 posted 2005-12-12 09:56 AM


wonderfully expressed
gemjop
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20 posted 2005-12-13 10:33 PM


Beautiful and breathtaking.

The words and picture.

x

Sunshine
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21 posted 2005-12-13 10:44 PM


Maree....

when you can get all of the strangers
here to dance with you....

then it is the time to acknowledge
all of your gifts....

smiling on you...

LITTLE ONE....




Kaoru
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22 posted 2005-12-14 11:50 PM


Do you know how utterly AWESOME this is?!?!?!
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