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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-12-10 07:47 PM


the prairie breeze
burns my throat
the loose dirt from the ground
flowing through my hair

I can see where this is going

the ground is opening under me
my feet are on the edge
I'll keep dancing
no promises
crossed fingers

everything rises

the trees disappear
and the streets disappear
the rivers and the mountains
the sky
I would keep dancing

if the ground weren't gone


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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2005-12-11 12:46 PM


don't count this amongst that 80% you spoke of. nice write
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2005-12-11 08:02 PM



Somehow a woman's poem . . .

Good

John

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