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Little Girl Lost

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Sunnyone
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0 posted 12-10-2005 07:29 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone


Little girl lost, so far from home
Who would have thought you’d love alone?
Your journey’s path was from your heart
You sought new life, a new love’s start…

But fantasies, now in the past
You found could break like shattered glass
Too many pieces scattered round
And some misplaced, ne’er to be found…

But poetess, and dreamer still
You pick up paper, ink and quill
It just feels right, to share some time
With those of literary mind…

So, maybe some things can’t be lost
And paths are waiting to be crossed
Where friends still share life’s curving road
To help each other ease the load…

And maybe, little girl, you’ll see
That losing sometimes sets us free…


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Listening to every heart


1 posted 12-10-2005 08:15 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

But poetess, and dreamer still
You pick up paper, ink and quill
It just feels right, to share some time
With those of literary mind…

So, maybe some things can’t be lost
And paths are waiting to be crossed
Where friends still share life’s curving road
To help each other ease the load…

~*~

Amen, sunnyone...

and welcome home!
Startime55
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2 posted 12-10-2005 09:02 AM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

Your words still have a way to touch the heart so strong they bring tears to the eyes and remind me of memories...the way you talk about your friends here and how wonderful it feels to feel their embrace as you share your inner self touched me deeply....I know you are dearly charished by those whose words wrap around you to help make your steps lighter....**big hugs*** take care, loved one....

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (12-10-2005 09:55 AM).]

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Deep in the heart


3 posted 12-10-2005 01:11 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Brava!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

miscellanea
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OH


4 posted 12-10-2005 02:50 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

Beautiful expression of compassion and love;
Especially liked the last few lines!

misc
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5 posted 12-10-2005 03:34 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

And maybe, little girl, you’ll see
That losing sometimes sets us free…



So true....sometimes, my friend.  
With love and hugs,
Ethel


(psssttt!!! Lookie what I'm learning to do!!)


JamesMichael
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6 posted 12-10-2005 06:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
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(big angel hugs) Oh Sunnyone, you have such a loving, golden heart that truly feels for everyone, dearest friend, I absolutely agree too that what doesn't kill us only makes us stronger, for I experienced too many sad days and heartache as a little boy, but they have only helped build my character and understand who I am and that I am capable, I am pure of heart and I can succeed, and now I've never felt happier and sexier in my life! (angel comfort hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart sends angel comfort hugs out to this someone in need and I offer holiday happiness hugs too just for good measure, yay, this is absolutely beautiful and touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Sunnyone
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8 posted 12-11-2005 01:09 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Thank you everyone, for your wonderful replies! It's so nice to get your feelings on my work, and always appreciated, you know?  When I first started writing this, it sounded a bit solemn, but the point I was trying to make was in the end, and I see now that it worked just fine...thank you, my friends...'S'

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

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9 posted 03-14-2006 01:15 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

So sadly true, but then, who would we be without our losses? They're just as valuable as our gains--and sometimes, even more so.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


10 posted 04-26-2007 07:08 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"losing sometimes sets us free…"

just wanting to "raise " some of my favorite poets~~


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