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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I’m listening.... so sure that if I’m still long enough the evocation of emotion will lilt softly to me the words the way to tell you good bye it will come to me.... some sudden someday in poetic personification this perfect penning in gentle love describe not so your heart won’t hurt more so that mine will not break anymore... the time will come.... when I can hear your voice and be left void of this ache my wishful thinking will no longer be wrapped in the color of your eyes or held upon your fingertips my lips, free from the devotion to your kiss.... .....today simply isn’t that day...... ~SEA~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Sue...  *wipe yer tear* there aren't any "good" byes... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Susan, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I can understand how difficult and frustrating these types of crossroads can be for anyone, when you feel a pang of reasoning in your heart that something is discomforting you but deep down there's still a place that feels love for someone deep down that counterwills the desperation! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you write with true heart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wow... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well either way they are still words that would break my heart. An aching, caring and fabulous write.   If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully written Sue. But, there are no good-byes. Hugs~Nancy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes... The day never comes...and that is OK too. Nicely written...ya dun good Sue. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ How do we do it ? This time, your words ... my heart too~ This is achingly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, no...not today and honestly? I don't know that that day will ever come....  and Marge... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Today isn't that day." Your heart will know the day...In my personal experience, that day came when I tired of the pain...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW, Sea....breaking up is so hard to do (now, I am hearing that song from the 60s). Really, this is so well done and my heart goes out to you. It is so hard, and this is so loving and thoughtful, showing your vulnerability....the tender heart. .....jo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
No, today isn't that day...this was beautiful and touching, and brought a tear to my eye...'S' |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’m listening.... so sure that if I’m still long enough the evocation of emotion will lilt softly to me the words the way to tell you good bye it will come to me.... some sudden someday in poetic personification this perfect penning in gentle love describe not so your heart won’t hurt more so that mine will not break anymore... the time will come.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah..you know I am loving this angsty gem... the vocab, allits and assonance added to this ones poetic loveliness... more so that mine will not break anymore... the time will come.... when I can hear your voice and be left void of this ache my wishful thinking will no longer be wrapped in the color of your eyes when you learn...will ya teach me? *sigh* ... our hearts are on moth time ... slooooooow motion. yaya  beautiful heart write Susan... Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
let not your heart break rather break mine in its stead that you be happy ~*~ I have missed reading your work, gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes James, that's just it, not tired of it yet I suppose... you know Jo...I know that song LOL and love it...no, no breaking up....just an old ghost... Sunnyone, good to see you here again, thank you! Janet...you are too kind to me....thank you so much... Interloper, I've missed you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighssss m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sea, this is a very sensitive, beautiful poem which says oceans about your beautiful, sensitive soul. I understand that today is not the day, but, if you know that is what you have to do, for whatever reason, the sooner you do it, the least pain for you and him. I kept on putting it off too, and kept on finding an excellent reason why it couldn't be done that day, but procrastinating, heightens the pain. Sometimes, one just has to bite the bullet. I am sure you will do it gently and kindly. Warm hugs Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Listening is a gift... listening deep... is an art.... . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan? not so your heart won’t hurt more so that mine will not break anymore... you are in my head this morning . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This belongs on top! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Just sending big hugs to you and hope that you get through this. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yep...Wow! Eric |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...beautifully sensitive expression! |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
SEA, Ahhhhmazing! I enjoy your writes. Written so tenderly and gently. Bitter sweet with pain and so full of love. Let me offer you hugs...and don't give up........on love...but sometimes we have to move on because theres a rainbow waiting after the rain! Thanks for sharing this! pictureme2 |
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