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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-12-09 03:38 PM



Snowy Owl’s Triolet



Silence roams this eve on swift wing’d flight
As golden eyes for sustenance seeks
Naught to be found if one doth not fly
Silence roams this eve on swift wing’d flight
Ancients are left still wondering why
This haunting sound of life is so bleak
Silence roams this eve on swift wing’d flight
As golden eyes for sustenance seeks




~*~

For our poet, Munda



© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-09 03:40 PM


smile...

now yer just showin' off!

You are going to make me try this, and I'll embarrass m'self yet again.

lovely stuff you do

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2 posted 2005-12-09 04:39 PM


If my Wolf/Snowy Owl tale can thrill you half as much as your Triolets thrill me, I'm going to be more than happy.

Geesh, you are good at these!! (and quick too! LOL)

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3 posted 2005-12-09 05:16 PM


oh, i am enjoying these my sunshineygirl

mxx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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4 posted 2005-12-09 05:41 PM


Beautiful!!!
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5 posted 2005-12-09 06:23 PM




E X Q U I S I T E ! !

~Let peace begin with me...  

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6 posted 2005-12-09 06:34 PM


Some day...yes, some day I might write one.
But...I doubt I will do nearly as well!

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7 posted 2005-12-09 07:27 PM


This is wonderful, Karilea. I am an owl collector. I have more owls than I do room to put them. LOL!
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8 posted 2005-12-09 07:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully graceful, sweet friend, I love snow owls as they truly are the serene messangers of the day, yay, Munda will love this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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9 posted 2005-12-09 08:00 PM


~beautiful~


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10 posted 2005-12-11 07:42 AM


Exquisite, Sunshine.

Smartchick, please don't collect me, LOL!

- Owl

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11 posted 2005-12-11 09:13 AM


Nothing silent 'bout your work.  It fairly SCREAMS your talent!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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12 posted 2005-12-11 11:32 AM


You should be very proud of this Kari.  

Have not tried my lovely triolet
(Gosh, I love that form, that's Karen's fault)

but here you write with refinement, its just perfect.

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13 posted 2005-12-11 11:36 AM


Oh my gosh...your words match this stunning picture perfectly....I love it...**big hugs**
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14 posted 2005-12-11 12:29 PM


good read
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15 posted 2005-12-11 02:49 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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