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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-12-09 04:23 AM

Silence of the White

This in the four, in the silence of white
Dwell I in the facets that sparkle the night
Lightness of touch, coolness in sight
Eying the sky with a child's mind, delight.

I think of you often, maybe a bit on the much
With thoughts incomplete watching window breath touch
Wondering how do you look in the whiteness so bright
As I lose dreamsleeping to view mind's invite.

And I wish for what isn't and I wish for what might
For now my eyes close in the pretense of write...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-12-09 05:41 AM

Very nice writing M and rhymed well too..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-12-09 07:10 AM

thank you Phil..we had a nice snowfall over night

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-12-09 09:56 AM

Oh, way cool writing M!

Love those last two lines.

I wish I could see the snow!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-12-09 10:16 AM

Maureen - I love this and I am keepin' it!!
We got dumped on last night as well.

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-12-09 10:57 AM

oh I couldn't sleep all night just kept waking up and looking outside to see how much had fallen,
and each time I kept wanting more!

Very nicely penned M. Don't get to cold or stiff digging out.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-12-09 02:49 PM

absolutely gorgeous! Certainly should become a gentle classic

very much enjoyed!

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