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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-12-07 08:09 AM


Sands of Time

I entered life with cry and lurch
And there I started on my search
It took a while for me to see
And even know that here I be

For when I started on my path
My mind was placed within a bath
The residue of past was gone
And I was new and freshly born

The spirit of the drive was there
Deep inside my soul somewhere
And I was pushed and prod to find
To add a little more this rind

To circle in this phantoms mode
To touch upon a higher code
To pierce once more the needles eye
To add a little more of I

So here I be this egos grime
To once more sift the sands of time



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1 posted 2005-12-07 08:50 AM


To circle in this phantoms mode
To touch upon a higher code
To pierce once more the needles eye
To add a little more of I
yep. I needed to read this one this morning sir Sey...
thanks guy.  Lovely write, as always.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-12-07 09:25 AM




Well done Sir!

I for one am glad of the mind bath...the way this life is going I must have been very, very bad the last one...



"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

littlewing
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3 posted 2005-12-07 09:37 AM


Hey Sy, have missed you and your words.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-12-07 01:37 PM


"To circle in this phantoms mode
To touch upon a higher code
To pierce once more the needles eye
To add a little more of I

So here I be this egos grime
To once more sift the sands of time"

Aha!  I found you Sy!
And just in time to enjoy this wonderful piece.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

scorpio
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5 posted 2005-12-07 02:01 PM


I love the unique perspective of this write Sy.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-12-07 02:37 PM


Gentle Spirit
You are indeed a gentle spirit.

Susan
You know I felt the same way.

littlewing
Missed you too.

Nancy
I miss you when you are not here.

scorpio
And I love your comments.

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7 posted 2005-12-07 07:42 PM


and..you sift them well Sir Sy...very well
indeed.

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8 posted 2005-12-07 07:55 PM


Sheesh just imagine, we will one day all be a new improved version   You are not only funny but you do it with such a flair for the truth.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-12-07 08:16 PM


Thank you Barry.

Sharon
Nothing wrong with a little humor.

Larry C
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10 posted 2005-12-07 09:10 PM


Sy is still the guy! Yes sir it's always a pleasure to read your mind. I mean writing.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-12-07 09:15 PM


Larry C
A pleasure to have you read me, thank you guy.

iliana
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12 posted 2005-12-08 02:38 AM


But what a sweet ego that be!  I just adore this write, Sy....right in line with my thinking, too.   ......jo
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-12-08 08:10 AM


iliana
You never fail me. Thank you.

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2005-12-09 11:14 AM


Mr. T. ~ how do you do it! Your brilliance, dulls not!

May your sands sift forever more!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-12-09 11:26 AM


Earth Angel
YOU ARE THE SWEETIEST ANGEL I KNOW.

Startime55
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16 posted 2005-12-09 01:18 PM


Keep shifting those sands of time for the treasures buried therein are priceless beyond compare....I love this poem...**big hugs**

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (12-09-2005 02:18 PM).]

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2005-12-09 01:42 PM



Your words are especially meaningful ~ for I suspect that you are surrounded by a host of members from the angelic realm!

~ May your day be one of joy and inner peace.

Love & Light,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2005-12-09 01:56 PM


Startime55
Thanks for the hug and like.

Earth Angel
How can you thank an Angel?

miscellanea
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19 posted 2005-12-09 03:44 PM


Seymour,

  Just as I remembered: the man of golden poetry!  It is so good to once again read your words!

miscellanea

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2005-12-09 06:26 PM


miscellanea
I missed you.

MGROVES
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21 posted 2005-12-11 07:59 AM


i have missed you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2005-12-11 03:35 PM


MGROVES
I have missed you too.

MGROVES
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23 posted 2005-12-11 10:29 PM


may you be blessed this xmas season, with more than the spirits that quide you , angels that watch over you.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2005-12-12 09:10 PM


MGROVES
And may you be the same.

MGROVES
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25 posted 2005-12-12 10:12 PM


thankyou, you are a true blessing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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26 posted 2005-12-15 08:44 AM


I want some of that bath water!!!! LOL

Lovely write, my friend... your words sift gently into my thoughts and make my day better. *S*

Seymour Tabin
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27 posted 2005-12-15 09:11 AM


MGROVES
I consider you a blessing too.

suthern
Anything to help you and your day.

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