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What If?
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What If? |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
hello first I'd like to thank anyone who commented on any of my other poems. If I haven't told you personally yet, I will soon. Anyway, I woke up this orning extra early, and needed to write, so here we go What If? If I were wiped into nonexistance, would anyone observe that faithful day? If I were diseased, would anyone pay tribute by my bedside? If I were shivering, would anyone offer their friendship as a blanket? If I were to tell my secrets, would anyone lend their ear and listen? If I were hungry, would anyone take me in and feed me? If I weren't here, would you be? |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Interesting. I enjoyed this a little. _Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Certainly thought provoking..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DE~ I adore this thought - 'If I were shivering, would anyone offer their friendship as a blanket? Thank you also for digging deep and for the response to one of my goldie oldies~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge&~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
yes to all of the questions in your poem... Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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