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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-12-05 01:11 AM


love really
never wanted
anything
to do
with me
call me
bitter
call me
cynical
call me
young
I don't care
when you've
tasted what
I have
you'd change
your point of view
life
is
nothing but
faint fumes
that
sometimes
I can't
even
grasp
age
is nothing
but a number
experience
is nothing
but laughter
and tears
don't sit
there and judge
my broken heart
and tell me
I have
alot to learn
I
have
a grasp
on reality
more so then others
not saying
I'm better than you
but I'm saying
don't assume
that you're better
than me...



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2005 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-12-05 03:49 AM


Enjoyed...James
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2005-12-06 09:24 AM


I have nothing to say but and geez, life just loves to kick us in our (badword)

You do see more than others, thats WHY you feel like THIS.

*smile*


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-12-06 09:38 AM


Kris, even when life kicks you in the pearlies, you still manage to keep a spark of your sense of humour alive. Your title, "Faint Fumes" is a fine example of that, my friend!

God bless you, sweetheart!

Giving you a great big hug of love ~ and a shoulder,
Linda

gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2005-12-06 09:41 AM


kristen, first, wish i was down at fraggle rock with you.

and yeah, i agree with sue, you do know, and its good that you wont let what people *think* you know become mixed up. you know what you feel, so up theirs, so to speak.

Good to read you again. x

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