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Open Poetry #36

If I couldn't

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-12-05 12:49 PM

Maybe I like you
Because I cant reach you

There once was a rose on a rock
Its roots surrounded the single rock
To search for the ground down below

The thorns fell off
Exposing the flower
It may have been naked
But it was home.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-12-05 04:34 AM

Enjoyed...James

Odidis
New Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 1
Kano, Nigeria

2 posted 2005-12-06 10:19 AM

Juju yours is the first I read here on siging up, soothing eh. Keep writing.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2005-12-06 12:33 PM

"But it was home" Perfect. Nicely done. Bob

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-12-07 02:10 AM

Thank you for replying to my poem. Oddis, I am honored to have you read my poem first. I have to say my favorits always seem to be the new poeple around here. always origanal. lol I am glad to see you all. I am glad you enjoyed this as well. It's good to see you again micheal. I have been on and off reading some of your poems, but I have been very busy guys.

-=Juju=-

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