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timpat92855 New Member
since 2005-12-04
Posts 5 |
hey all, im new and just wanted to know if any of ya;ll liked my writing I noticed today, That i missed you, I thought about the times we had, The good and the bad, Things like that i wanna forget, You are such apart of me, i can feel you at night, Like a ghost, You haunt me, Like all the rest, You walked out, Guess it wasnt meant to be, So i end with this, I love you, An goodbye... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a beautifully heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I can relate to these bittersweet feelings myself, as indeed love can be a very confusing, emotional force, but even when it can ache more than anything else, it is always the most beautiful feeling we have! (sigh) Bless you, sweet friend, I know you're going to fit right in here as we all share these feelings you do and can relate to, I love it, welcome to Passions! (smiles) Ooohhhhh...and please check your e-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here just for you, yay!  Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I like it! and welcome to Pip! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Please enjoy your stay with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, you can't leave so soon! LOL Welcome to Passions! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome!! I hope you enjoy your time here!  |
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timpat92855 New Member
since 2005-12-04
Posts 5 |
thanks everyone this is the first poetry forum i found and liked, so i will stay here for awhile, i'll post some more of mine later to get some reviews |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to PiP ... enjoy your stay~ Make yourself comfortable, read and reply to the poetry of others and before you know it, you'll definitely feel right at home as friendships start to blossom~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
welcome to pip ~~=] Great first posting hope to see more ~wolfman |
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