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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-12-04 11:42 AM



What are we?
Standing on this place called earth
I was not born a philosopher here
But still I‘m expected to seek some reason
And to find my self in this mirror

Is it wrong to try to be a better person?
Because I am and always will be at war
And there are always those causalities
Left behind because I went too far

My reflection is not what it should be
More alien, because I know not my face
In this world or reality
Stretched through out empty space

So just allow me
A little mind
-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

© Copyright 2005 Juju - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2005-12-04 02:32 PM


this is beautiful. i love your work.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-12-06 05:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

3 posted 2005-12-06 09:49 PM


"So just allow me
a little mind."

What a truly humble yet intriguing request. Bob

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-12-06 10:16 PM


Such a simple request...yet...
left me pondering.
Very much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...  

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