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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-01 07:37 AM


we introduced ourselves yesterday
like we were first times
in cellophane wrappers
but we knew how to undo the veils

even with our minds closed
we were tiptoes playing in dry water
behind the blinds of the tree people
you wore shimmer speak minimize

with naughty buttons
and lotion on your hands
to make that whisper sound
when you smoothed your skin

and I wore you with my eyes
in something dark with pale
a cake and eat it too gown
imagination long legged

above the high heals
and happy times sitting
on the edge of beds by streams
letting our thought water run

laughing together then
when we splashed in puddles
and made insatiable angels
in the warm down meadows

of our vanilla scented seaside


_____
daark



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-01 08:21 AM




This is so reminiscent of McKuen's work...
and you know he is one of my favorites...

but you're working hard
to be number one...

Good morning, DS...



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-12-01 08:38 AM


my ohhhh my but your in fine form this morning....I can almost feel that inception all the way from the east coast...inspirational music in the ears of the reader...oh, you do what you do so well....
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2005-12-01 09:33 AM


ms sunshine, a pleasure to be compared
if even with squinted eyes and stretched imagination, to rod..thank you lady frind

___________

ms leej, thank you for the east coast drive by..you warm my pen with your touch, and as always you smile me.  thank you

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Ratleader
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4 posted 2005-12-01 09:36 AM


The P Channel.....lessee, I've heard of the Sports Channel, Home Improvement Channel, whole network called Home Shopping....P Channel...wonder what it's about....and whether people have to pay to watch!

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Martie
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5 posted 2005-12-01 11:11 AM


"in the warm down meadows

of our vanilla scented seaside"

How beautiful and love filled is the scene you paint!     I wonder where this P street is?


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-12-01 11:39 AM


beautiful scented visions you leave us with Dark.  N'joyed this...


laughing together then
when we splashed in puddles
and made insatiable angels
in the warm down meadows

of our vanilla scented seaside


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2005-12-01 11:48 AM


(big grin) a channel off of Ventura Harbor, down by the marina off of P street..

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OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2005-12-02 12:34 PM


Whisper of fingertip water beautiful!

- Owl

MGROVES
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9 posted 2005-12-03 06:01 AM


sensually devine

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2005-12-03 11:58 AM


always a sensual read.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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