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Open Poetry #36

What A Fool

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-11-30 11:32 PM

What A Fool

Fools get
straightened out
sooner or later.
They always do.
Now that you've
gone and left
me all alone
I can see
what a fool
I was for you.

JamesLee
November28
2005
Rejection Series
2 of 8

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-12-01 12:14 PM

Aw....this is good. It should go on a card.

.....jo

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-12-01 01:12 AM

I can relate James

Hope

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-12-01 04:01 AM

i too can relate to this one

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-12-01 07:07 AM

sad, but you were not a fool as we learn from each person we meet...James, people venture across our paths for a reason, and they we are not always supposed to expect a romantic relationship...more so, to learn from the friendship and be perhaps changed by their perspectives. You were not a fool, as you loved this person once, gave her the most intimiate part of yourself...don't be angry, be more so improved by the experience and go forward a little wiser, by it. Love to you
Lee J.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-12-01 06:01 PM

Thank you iliana, HopeS, MGROVES and Lee J for the nice comments...
Lee J thanks for some comments on the bigger picture...James

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