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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-11-30 05:06 AM


Cold winds of autumn hush me,
burn within me your bright colours.
Lonely clouds race black astride,
tempestuous air cooly refreshing.
Sinister black trees watch,
as in my mind i see eyes,
staring deeper into my soul.
Keening chill wind does not rouse me
from within my secret hiding place
mind, staring onward to the distance,
while rain flecks the transparent
windows of my soul, creating jewel drops
for the newly risen sunstream.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-30 08:55 AM


Phil, you are a master at setting the tone of a scene! You create atmospheres that are almost palpable! From warm and Light, to cold and Dark ~ and everything in between!


Linda


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