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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2005-11-29 10:00 AM


No, you must not ignore me
while I lie here
silently begging,

pleading

for you to hold me
and gently caress me
fingertips touching lightly
as your thoughts
create a mystical moment
held somewhere in time
and I;

I am the first
to see,
        to feel
to know
  the true extent
         of your heart and soul

and I have watched you
pass me by
and have felt the tears
fall from your eyes

while inside

you scream

for release,
PLEASE

pick me up
and use me

find some peace

write.......


    

{graphics by Karilea, used with much gratitude}


live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-11-29 10:29 AM



Gotta love the squitch
of the pen...
when it itches

for the right write!


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-11-29 10:47 AM


WRITE ON!!!
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
3 posted 2005-11-29 10:52 AM


I'm glad you listened to the pen.

believe in what your heart feels...

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2005-11-29 11:11 AM


Donna...Beautiful thoughts and words.
I wrote one last week simular to this beauty but mine doesn't even come close to yours.

Thanks for sharing.
The words will come on their own when the heart is ready to speak...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

bgj
Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128
Ga. USA
5 posted 2005-11-29 12:37 PM


"I am the first
to see,
        to feel
to know
  the true extent
         of your heart and soul"
Wonderful write, lots of luck,
bgj

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

6 posted 2005-11-30 05:22 AM


Donna who could ignore such fine writing?...There is a simmering here....gently rising in steaming stream..and the reult is effective...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
7 posted 2005-11-30 08:29 AM


Your quill may scream when ignored, but once it is held by your illustrious hand,  its Spirit voice is soft and Gentle.

Hugs with love,
Linda

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