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Yogi
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0 posted 2005-11-26 04:40 PM



Night falls
Shadows fade and die
I rest with eyes closed
Silence
Such Beauty Enters My Mind
A place
where no pain and hate survives

I walk on white sugary sand
Feel the ocean spray on the breeze
The warmth of the sun
Enters my heart and I feel so free

Yet In Reality
I’m locked away
My tormented soul roams lost
My heart slowly dies inside me
Weakening with every beat
I can’t escape the depression inside

Beaten all my life
Yes I’ve dreamt of this beautiful existence
Yet deep inside this will never be
Even though my father is dead
He still haunts me, awake and asleep

I would do anything to escape this life
Throughout the days and nights
I can dream of good times
But sometimes my dreams are invaded
A parasite from the underworld
For he says daddies home

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-26 04:50 PM


Yogi~
In your purge of pain through your penning,
you can and will find that peaceful place that will hopefully give you some brightly colored ink-of-joy ...~

Your writing always moves me to send up a prayer for you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-11-26 07:46 PM


Do not allow these thoughts to take up anymore of your waking or sleeping time. This is your life now. You are in command. Write it out, then throw it out.
I'm prayin' for your inner peace.
hugs, Chris

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-11-26 07:49 PM


May I just echo what has been already said..
and send you healing hugs and good thoughts.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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