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A Letter to Nowhere
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A Letter to Nowhere |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I am not sure why this bothers me so I didn’t know And you didn’t tell me Once we were close I miss the conversations But not the way it hurt To know it was best left to another life Your words Inspired A world of lace Stories of harsh weather And undying love I always loved a good story Yours were no exception I hope that your uncertainties Become certain with a happy ending Leaving you time to come back To tell me a story or two "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I hope that your uncertainties Become certain with a happy ending Leaving you time to come back To tell me a story or two I see so much in your words here Susan.. well done indeed gal... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and make sure that a warm fire is burning so that the glimmer of your eyes can be seen. Nicely done, enjoyed this Susan. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding, "me too"  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hope that your uncertainties Become certain with a happy ending Leaving you time to come back To tell me a story or two love this~~  M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your style is so pure and clear. Love reading you Susan. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I always loved a good story Yours were no exception I hope that your uncertainties Become certain with a happy ending Leaving you time to come back To tell me a story or two" ~Soft smile of understanding here~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(angel friendship hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is a most wonderfully, thoughtful letter, dearest friend, I certainly wish this to come true and you both can find happiness and maybe there can come a day when you can both meet and share these stories with one another as good friends, yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was a pleasure to read. thanks for sharing. My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 thank you for the very kind replies!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I miss the conversations But not the way it hurt To know it was best left to another life Your words Inspired A world of lace Stories of harsh weather And undying love I always loved a good story Yours were no exception I hope that your uncertainties Become certain with a happy ending Leaving you time to come back To tell me a story or two this was the mist of love reaching out in forgiveness and understanding.... wonderfully written Susan, as only you can do,,,with those great big eyes in your heart...and a very large and lovely forehead. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Your words Inspired A world of lace Stories of harsh weather And undying love I've heard some of those "stories", too, Susan. That's why I'm so leary sometimes, I think? Hugs, you Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yep, have to nod right along too. This actually made me smile thinking of those times . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*cough* ah...LeeJ? Are you sayin' I have a big forehead?? Hoenestly, it's not mine! LOL Ethel, I do love ya!Sue, it was written for someone that has disappeared without so much as a "Thank you for being a friend and I will miss you"...just a painful ripping away. Didn't seem right.  Thank you all for taking the time to read my meager offerings. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very glad to see this one come back up Susan, words ring as true today as the first time I read them. Wonderful write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and your own stories are always worth the read. Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Many seem to like your last four lines and I'm no exception. This is a very telling story of love, separation and hope for a return. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I am so sorry Susan, that is a horrible thing to do. It was your words, and how you explained the storytelling and learning and teaching that caused me to smile. Having THAT - made me smile. What was done to you was indeed, very wrong. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes I was hoping for someone to return and add to those chapters Hope |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
very nice poetry....paul |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
the name of this one drew me in reminds me of an old love story with a end that seems sad but later turns out to be a blessing in disguise peace ~wolfie |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Verrrrrrrrry nice, S. VERY. |
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