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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2005-11-25 10:47 AM



Warmth eludes me today
As I huddle around myself
It’s almost time to wake up
And pretend interest in something other than sleep

My mind is heavy
As it carries the weight of loved ones
Some wishing for a clear breath
Others hoping for relief from self hatred

This life is hard and harder than it should be for some
Things don’t get done like they should
In a place that brags of it’s superiority
Cut off like a diseased limb, hoping no one will notice
That an entire culture may be gone

And yet…

Someone underestimated the power
Of a people
And a way of life that will not be denied

Hobbled by the lack
They will rise again of their own accord
Growing stronger and learning
Not to trust, that which would leave them
For dead

Warmth eludes me everyday
These days
Thanks to the cold realization
Of a nation that can’t seem to take care
Of it’s own


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (11-29-2005 10:46 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-11-25 10:59 AM


Warmth eludes me everyday
These days
Thanks to the cold realization
Of a nation that can’t seem to take care
Of it’s own


You said it sister....and know my thoughts are right there with yours this day..

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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2 posted 2005-11-25 11:56 AM


As an onlooker of current events in the States, this really saddens me as I do realize the state of mind people must be in right now.  I can only hope that the load every southern American has had to bear lately is lightened soon, and they will all be better prepared for a better tomorrow.
to you sweet lady, for the heartfelt write.

To see real beauty you must look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

Aenimal
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3 posted 2005-11-25 12:18 PM


not just the nation, very few places, and very few people looking out for anyone but themselves

*hugs&otherthings*

icebox
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4 posted 2005-11-25 01:01 PM


Wow!

...and I thought it was just me.

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-11-25 03:10 PM




I have a new theme song these days--
http://www.webfitz.com/lyrics/index.php?option=com_webfitzlyrics&Itemid=27&func=fullview&lyricsid=4332

thank you

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2005-11-25 03:16 PM


came back to add, that song has been driving me nuts.

It's been in my head for a month now, and I'm not thinking clearly, but I am smiling with wry amusement now--

"Something In The Air" - Tom Petty


heh.



love ya lady

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-11-25 03:17 PM


perfect song.  

Oddly, my daughter, who doesn't listen to a whole lot of news..tells me she had a dream the other night and it started out as Katrina hitting but was endless...she said it went on so long it was like the apocalypse...

Made me shudder.

Thank you all...and Karen?   I knew you would know.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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8 posted 2005-11-25 03:23 PM


"Warmth eludes me everyday
These days
Thanks to the cold realization
Of a nation that can’t seem to take care
Of it’s own"

Well said Susan..very well said indeed!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words..
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

vandana
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9 posted 2005-11-25 05:36 PM


good read
RMW
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10 posted 2005-11-28 10:00 AM


Susan .... Well done. Bob
garysgirl
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11 posted 2005-11-28 10:15 AM


Perfect, Susan. And so much the thoughts
of everyone these days.
Hugs,
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2005-11-28 10:31 AM


Thank you everyone...



"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

iliana
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13 posted 2005-11-28 11:01 AM


Susan, you've verbalized so well what I have come to realize.  But, thank goodness, there are caring people still....thank goodness.   ....jo
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