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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-11-23 08:56 AM


If I were to write your epitaph
I know, dear friend, that you would laugh
because I would say, how special you are
and how you're so loved by those, near and far.

No one woman could hold you, of course it's true
but yet; still the same, all women do.
With just a thought you often brighten the day,
cherished, in hearts of many you will always stay;

and I know that even from the grave
you would be treasured for all that you gave
so yes, dear friend, you may laugh
but every word would ring true,

if I were to write your epitaph.

  




Having just one good friend, is worth far more than having a thousand fair weather friends.....{me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-23-2005 10:13 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2005-11-23 09:36 AM


ms gs...now you are makin someone smuggy with big ol grins I bet, kewl stuff lady friend..but perhaps you bring out the best in one..I would think that so anyway.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-11-23 09:59 AM


you bring treasured smiles m'friend,
thank you for the view from your eyes this morning.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Nightshade
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3 posted 2005-11-23 10:05 AM


Lovely Donna.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-11-23 10:05 AM


Donna, would you write an epitaph for me! I'd like a good "laugh" ~ and a gigantic smile to send me on my way ~ when my time does come! lol

An epitaph almost worth dying for! Flirty

You have such a loving and gentle spirit.

Hugs with love,
Linda

Sunshine
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5 posted 2006-08-17 10:57 AM



Hmmmm...umhummmm....yep.

Smiling.




nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2006-08-17 05:28 PM


I am glad Karilea brought this back..I missed seeing it..and it is a beauty!


M

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