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the lies she believed
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the lies she believed |
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beaniebaby Member
since 2005-11-17
Posts 55 |
deception from conception fated to be never good enough its not just you no one will ever be so do oh do stop trying it is so much easier to bear when you learn not to care formation defines destruction built up to be torn down do oh do my dear stop getting back up you must agree it is so very foolish so much easier it is to bear if you would please learn not to care love turned hate it is not wrong it is called surviving do oh do stop crying your sobbing it does bother so that shattered piece is not your heart it is only in your head you see and it is ever so much easier to bear when you teach yourself not to care |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Very interesting poem. But I did enjoy the read. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Really enjoyed this Beanie!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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beaniebaby Member
since 2005-11-17
Posts 55 |
thank you sweetp, it is a different style for me as well, but I am not questioning what needs to be written, just writing susan, love your quote...and yep, I thought you might identify with this |
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