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dapyun
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since 2005-11-22
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0 posted 2005-11-22 05:40 AM



Before, I pushed the thoughts out of my head.
Before, it could never be.
But now, I feel some things I'd never thought.
And, everything feels real to me.

Who would have thought that in those years,
I would have fallen so hard?
I never saw through all that time,
You were holding the special card.

Memories of 'it could never happens'
Thinking you were only a friend.
Seem to have flown out the window,
Rationalities have come to an end.

It shouldn't even be this difficult,
You should just see the light.
It should just come to you one day.
You'll see it's worth the fight.

Love is something great and special.
Something I want to share.
I want to share this with you, my dear.
Show you my adoration and care.

If you see my actions and feel my struggle,
Let me know if I should keep on.
Or if what you want is for me to stop,
Don't use my love as a pawn.

Who would have thought, back in the day,
That I would fall for you.
But, the only thing that I know right now,
Is my love for you is true.

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-11-22 08:19 AM


dapyun
Welcome to pip, I enjoyed the read.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-11-22 09:10 AM


Welcome to PIP...
Enjoyed your first post...

And must respond...yeah, never give up!
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-11-22 09:11 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I shall be looking forward to more of your words.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2005-11-22 09:15 AM


Welcome to Pip!  Yes, love is always true but sometimes it just has to pack its bags and leave for foreign shores.  Fortunately it always teaches us a thing or two before then.  Enjoyed the read!
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