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dapyun
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0 posted 2005-11-22 05:37 AM



As I wait, for you to enter my life.
Each moment stabs at me like a knife.
As I wait, for you to walk through that door.
My world is nothing but a down pour.
As I wait, for your shadow to appear.
I try not to shed a single tear.
As I wait, for us to be more.
I anticipate what could be in store.
As I wait, for you to call me yours.
Nervous sweat seeps out my pores.

As I wait, for the courage to kiss you.
As I wait, and pray you think the same, too.
As I wait, my heart is breaking in two.

And so, I'll forever wait for you to be mine.
For the sun in my world to finally shine.

But please, don't make me wait too long.
I don't know how much longer I can be strong.

It's evident, you were the one in my dreams.
My feelings are right, or so it seems.

I still believe in the little thing called fate.
And so I sit here, and patiently...wait.

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2005-11-22 09:28 AM


Lovely first post!

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2 posted 2005-11-22 09:33 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

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3 posted 2005-11-22 09:52 AM




Welcome to Passions
Enjoyed your first post
Have fun here
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4 posted 2005-11-22 10:03 AM


Sometimes fate comes to you, and sometimes you have to look for it.....most times though, all you need is to be open....to notice-notice-notice everything....because it's there for you already, or will be soon.

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5 posted 2005-11-22 05:13 PM


WELCOME!
to wait...may be your fate
and while you wait, hope you will enjoy the view in these blue pages

aujussy wolf
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6 posted 2005-11-22 10:13 PM


It's evident, you were the one in my dreams.
My feelings are right, or so it seems.

I still believe in the little thing called fate.
And so I sit here, and patiently...wait.
  
  
  
sad but true , i liked this in a sappy way lol hang in there and something will come along for ya `
~wolf

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