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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Secrets Sometimes it builds when least expected the loneliness, tomorrow's fears. Mind interred, the rest is absent brought on the forth of this day's tears. The ups and downs of new life rivals the calming soft of back when, then. The full moon links the yesterdays dissolving as it wanes again. So often when I think these thoughts I track the prints my fingers make. Temptation calling out in voices headstrong words to fill this ache. Sighing once or maybe twice to fill my lungs, to energize. I walk the walk down narrow pathways, alone this morn under darkened skies. Sometimes a stranger comes my way, sits beside and holds my hand through words of caring, not by touching until eyes on his, my own do land. I'm naked often, see-through even easily one feels my pain. Though smiling is my front of course, my voice will lose its strong domain. And then I hold the back of it pretending all is well and fine. But hazel eyes give way the secrets tears in need of warmth to dine. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"But hazel eyes give ways to secrets..." What a wonderfully musical phrase. Nicely done, M. Bob |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ You share such deep thoughts ...~ 'The full moon links the yesterdays dissolving as it wanes again.' And I love the delicacy of this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Though smiling is my front of course, my voice will lose its strong domain." Ah Maureen, this sounds so much like myself. I can smile and put on a good front most times, but my voice breaks and gives my true feelings away. Heart hugs, Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"So often when I think these thoughts I track the prints my fingers make. Temptation calling out in voices headstrong words to fill this ache." Sure do understand this, Maureen. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And then I hold the back of it pretending all is well and fine. But hazel eyes give way the secrets tears in need of warmth to dine. As the others, I also understand this completely, Maureen. Excellent writing, as always. Hugs, Ethel |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Secrets A touching poem of my heart. I felt your pain. Keep those hazel eyes smiling. pictureme2 |
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dapyun Junior Member
since 2005-11-22
Posts 11 |
very deep. i loved it. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes it builds when least expected So very true....and I think that every line which follows this one, carries reality at its heart. Some poems are gifts to the reader, and this is one of them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And then I hold the back of it pretending all is well and fine" I think most of us try to hide our pain...and those of us here write about it..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree with Susan Maur, and want to send you a hug also. ((HUGSSSSSSSSS)) |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
I'm naked often, see-through even easily one feels my pain. Though smiling is my front of course, my voice will lose its strong domain. Very Nice Verse M Great Job! |
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