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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-11-21 08:09 AM


I hadn't needed the loose change
of your denim dreams
cowboy'd straddle my chevy's
convertable underbelly
with your big feet gas and brakes
making a bobble head
out of my wishful thinking,
but just however speakin

you did dress up miss-spectable
in your nearly nothins
and that swishblade heal high
that sliced a "dare you to dance"
inside my casual conversation
like a gator's teeth on bubblewarp
and gave me the rest of your message too
before the music blue oozed

and you just put your hand there
accidental friendly on my thigh
like it had slept over a few times
and knew where everything was
and you reminded me too, as you leaned
where you had left all of yours
but that was accidental too
cause a lady wouldn't be that bold

unless her propers were her other shoes
__________

daark

scribblenote: somewhere a bit rowdy and western..and naughty pine wall'd.

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-11-21 11:05 AM


DS

Sounds like the little harbor bar I chanced upon once with Taylor, at sundown dancing time.  

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2005-11-21 02:01 PM


and the blue stew was stirring the skin of the dancing toe lovelies..
different joint lil neighbor..but the same kind of good times
thanks for the eyes lady

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