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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-11-20 04:14 AM


gently shape my heart
to take this time
the snow may fall
and bury what it is i might have said
and bury what it is that grew inside me
while the imprint still remains
take that risk
and make it your everything
i will say my words of morning
but it is you that will have to drink them in
and let the disaster grow within your body
till you expand
and create
building up the tension
that you thrive on
so you can edge towards existence
and become glory



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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240

1 posted 2005-11-20 03:42 PM


Can’t say I like this, as a poem, butttt I might be wrong
Seems it needs a bump

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