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0 posted 2005-11-19 06:07 PM



What wonderful days
And nights?
Thinking of you in between,
Each breath-

If likeness of love exists-
Then I have found it in you,
So simple was your love,
I fought so hard to let it go,

Now that I sit here and
Drink,
My mind drifts off,
Thinking negative thoughts,

You came in my life,
But never left it.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-19 09:41 PM


Sometimes even lost love never leaves.
Enjoyed the write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2005-11-20 12:31 PM


bravo man , good work
~wolf

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3 posted 2005-11-20 01:34 AM


it seems even breathing
involves the mind
and the heart.
excellent.

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