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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-11-19 08:18 AM



Joy’s Faith



Joy seems, at times, bent, rent with pain

                                        But never, m’dear, fear the light

Hoar frost seeps in, a yearly gain

                                        Our whispers are heard through the night

Where are the hands that held this heart?

                                        ‘Tis memories holding tight

Emotions seem to fall apart…

                                      ‘Tis love that Faith will bring things right.

~*~

In the gray of month and falling leaves
When life was tired of its achieve
Memories became birds flocking the sky
Somehow God’s pain finds a quiet sigh

All know that living comes full complete
When circles come round and edges meet
As we are held within love’s sweet ring
Circled in warmth that empathy brings


© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-11-19 08:21 AM


you always seem to say the right thing at the right time. and you always bring sunshine

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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2 posted 2005-11-19 09:21 AM


I loved the format of the begining Karilea and of course the rest of it was pretty good as well!   

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 2005-11-19 09:23 AM


~beautiful~

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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4 posted 2005-11-19 09:32 AM


All know that living comes full complete
When circles come round and edges meet
As we are held within love’s sweet ring
Circled in warmth that empathy brings


An eternal truth that can be never be forgotten or said enough.  Well said.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2005-11-19 09:37 AM


We are limited to three sets of words

You write 3-dimensionally

Yes Sunshine another rough week but at least I am getting the time to write on Piptalk

Take care

Dave

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6 posted 2005-11-19 01:46 PM


Karilea~
I heard a soft whisper ... and found from whence it came~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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7 posted 2005-11-19 02:42 PM


Sissie

"All know that living comes full complete
When circles come round and edges meet
As we are held within love’s sweet ring
Circled in warmth that empathy brings"

I wish that I had written this!!  Such truth in the beauty of your words.  

Angelheart
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8 posted 2005-11-19 02:45 PM


this was a joy to read, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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9 posted 2005-11-19 03:19 PM


Encouragement comes in all forms but when it comes from sunshine's wing the world is brighter for it. Lovely sensitive write.
Congratulations on the book.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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10 posted 2005-11-21 09:33 AM


For things such as these, there's no time quite so right as, NOW....

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11 posted 2005-11-21 01:59 PM


thank you for the encouraging words formed into such a lovely write...sigh...one can never have too much encouragement ... especially when one's joy is crying
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