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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-11-18 07:45 AM


azure undulation
in your ribald tremble
yes I still crave your bosoms
when they are oiling in their shimmer
when they are the tides risen ample

and I am but the gasping of the sands
cloistered in my seascape monkery
offering but the sacrifice of my beads
to the saliva of your frothing browse
when you flourish in your harpy's haunting

of the pier point's protrusions
and between the black walled wharfages
where you have draped saturated gowns
as a bawdy bulwark's graffiti
that offers only glances from night spend gazing

to a worshiper's mouthfuls of starvation

___________
daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-11-18 07:51 AM




Sounds...
alive.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-11-18 08:56 AM


yes, it's like that for me to, upon visiting the sea, and you have plucked these sensations from the heart of life, and placed them down on paper with the senses tasting it well....


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with you
3 posted 2005-11-18 10:07 AM


intense and beautiful
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-11-18 11:47 AM


thanks gurls...you make my day with your smiles


Martie
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5 posted 2005-11-18 03:53 PM


DS

Beautiful, the way the words make everything so sensual and aroused.  I hope you are safe from the fire!  

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2005-11-18 04:29 PM


Absolutely stunning m'friend ...do it again.

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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7 posted 2005-11-18 06:30 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I know this ecstasy ever so much because ever since I was a little boy, I always dreamed of living right by the ocean, yet I lived over a thousand miles from it in Colorado, and now I live only an hour-and-a-half from it and desire ever sooooooo much to go out to Cannon Beach, yay! (does happy dance) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-11-19 03:33 AM


Nice...James
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9 posted 2005-11-19 07:35 AM


yes you make the world a sensual place

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Kaoru
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10 posted 2005-11-20 10:08 PM


Beautiful writing. Always.
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