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fmlbarebackrider2001
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0 posted 2005-11-18 12:34 PM



Looking across the table this morning
Your blue eyes dance over my face
I feel the heat rise to color my face
And quickly look away.

Your laughter sings in my ears
Your hand covers the space
Teasing words drift from your lips

My heart is bounding
My mouth runs dry
My mind is erassed
I hear the heavens sing.

Lord, this isn't suppose to happen
After all, we're just friends
What would he think
If he knew of the love I had for him.

Would he run and hide
Or would he stay and laugh
But maybe, with a prayer
He'd share my dream and want to care.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

© Copyright 2005 Cory - All Rights Reserved
pictureme2
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1 posted 2005-11-18 12:46 PM


ahhhh the affairs of the heart.
Can't help but ask...in your last poem you
promised in the next poem you write
"The next poem I write
Will have a Man bigger
Than life
With eyes that are older than
Time."
this be the man! ;-)
pictureme2


fmlbarebackrider2001
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2 posted 2005-11-18 01:14 AM


lol sure is. Wasn't sure anyone would catch that. lol

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

JL
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3 posted 2005-11-18 01:30 AM


Sounds like a lucky guy!
Great write.

JL

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4 posted 2005-11-18 11:04 AM


Cory~

'Lord, this isn't suppose to happen
After all, we're just friends
What would he think
If he knew of the love I had for him.'


Ahhhh ... mayhaps he would be delighted ?
Tell him ... might be just the news that would make his day ~   AND YOURS !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-11-18 11:09 AM


I enjoyed this carry-over from your first post.
looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

fmlbarebackrider2001
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6 posted 2005-11-18 10:10 PM


lol don't look for too many carry-overs guys. I don't have many of them but I'm working on a few.

God Bless,
Cory

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

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