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0 posted 2005-11-17 05:43 PM



I'm forever stepping on eggshells.
At least, that's how it seems.
Crunching, crushing Life along the way,
sometimes tearing it at the seams.

But each step takes me closer
to a mysterious beckoning place,
and all along the way I hear
heartbeats of the human race.

I hear some cry in suffering and pain,
some drenched forever in poverty's pouring rain.
I hear others laugh happily,
as they go their merry way each day
with the luck-of-the-draw,
and financial gain.

But each step takes me deeper
within the heart of the human race.
No matter which way I step
or upon which foot I might lead,
the steps that bring me into harmony
are the ones that guide me to heed,
to take care of other's needs.

For caring for others
is sharing the heartbeat
of one's innermost spiritual soul...
a worthwhile attainable goal.

So I view the eggshells in my pathway
as Life's stepping stones
that enable me to be
whole.

*thank you my friends,
for all the times
you've helped me
reach my goal



© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-17 06:12 PM


Hey Kacy...

as long as there is a light at the end, step on all the eggshells you desire....nice words, nice thoughts....hugssss

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2 posted 2005-11-17 07:06 PM


For caring for others
is sharing the heartbeat
of one's innermost spiritual soul...
a worthwhile attainable goal.

~*~

Truer words...

are only spoken
by good hearts...

Thank you, Kacy!

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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-11-17 07:50 PM


You are a caring soul Kacy.
Very nice write much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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4 posted 2005-11-17 09:21 PM


a simple act of kindness
one human to another
goes so far........
thank you for your kindness

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5 posted 2005-11-17 09:46 PM


"For caring for others
is sharing the heartbeat
of one's innermost spiritual soul...
a worthwhile attainable goal."

You dear Kacy have a very kind and compassionate soul.
Heart hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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6 posted 2005-11-17 11:18 PM


Very moving words. Close enough to reach out and tug on your heart's strings.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

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