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Open Poetry #36

To My Soul

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-11-17 11:23 AM

To My Soul

Reaching depth not yet analyzed.
By Your hand I have realized.
A touch, a glow in brilliance.
Forming faith in resilience.
As your breviloquence,
in penned word art.
Opens my heart,
in through my
tutored eye
To my
Core

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-11-17 11:29 AM

W O N D E R F U L ! !

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-11-17 11:40 AM

You had me at the first sentence

Reaching depth not yet analyzed.

and the core of you is not only beautiful, but filled with wondrous life, still to be written...loved the assurance of this...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-11-17 11:56 AM

Your open heart has gifted your soul ~ and your readers! ~ with glorious penned word art!

I loved this entire post!